The one piece of evidence that shows Fate is Romeo doesn’t get the letter for the plan and he then sees Juliet laying looking dead and So he drinks the potion and Juliet wakes up and after all that she stabs herself and dies with romeo
The one piece of evidence that shows Fate is Romeo doesn’t get the letter for the plan and he then sees Juliet laying looking dead and So he drinks the potion and Juliet wakes up and after all that she stabs herself and dies with romeo
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November 13, 2012 at 8:27 pm
This is progress, my good man.
What we need to do now is slow it down. One of the tricks to essay writing is to express one thing at a time. This means that every point you make needs to be explained before you move to the next one. For example:
“One piece of evidence that shows fate in Romeo and Juliet is that Romeo doesn’t get the letter from Friar Lawrence that explained the plan. This plan which involved Juliet taking a potion that made her appear dead, was meant to allow them to be together, however…”
Do you think you could change your answer to give this much detail, and finish it off?
CW
November 16, 2012 at 4:59 pm
Let me know if you need help with my advice.
CW
November 19, 2012 at 11:41 am
I will